yyeeessshh.
ok. first off let me say wtf. its AKIRA. you cant screw with AKIRA. it revolutionized anime and everything about it, and although hell, you did this in 20 minutes, we sure can tell. even when kaneda fires the laser gun i could see the black box you put around it sticking out from the rest of the frame. seriously, if you want to make something involving AKIRA, try making it good. nice attempt, but far from a 10.