Reviews for SSAM #4

[Angora]

quite moving

I wonder if thar's a true story, or just made up one. Everything quite moving, but a little bit boring. Sorry for that. I just want to tell that it's all great job, but even though I am a girl, I don't feel really sorry... Maybe because some of what character "said" seemed to be unreal. Like when he was running after that car. "I felt like everything gone...". Well, if that's a true story, then it's a proof that boys have feelings :).

I'm waiting for the next one, kisses from Angora :D

[denkosensei]

Great story, very compelling.

I personally did not like the South Park style visual that you used. If these are your characters I felt that you should have your own way of drawing them, not borrowing somebody else's style. The story itself was very good, though, and the quotes and such at the end were very helpful to the story. The few times that there were voices they sounded kind of awkward, I'm not sure if it was the volume in relation to the background music or the actual voice, but it wasn't quite right. Other than those few small things, though it was wonderfully done. 0s in interactivity and humor because it wasn't, but it wasn't meant to be so that didn't even calculate into my overall score. I WANTED to just leave them blank but it wouldn't let me.

[Darkembers]

very good

im always warmed by these flash submissions, anyone, and i mean ANYONE, who can right and make from the heart like that, thinking about everyword and image thats put into it, planing all the gaps and tension building areas to rise the occasion is more than alright by me. im a pretty philisophical guy myself and well, i gues i speak for evryone wen i say i know exactly where ur coming from with the message in the flash. personally i think the grading system is harsh on submissions like this, there should be a seperate category for philosophy/love/emotion as there is no way that its fair to degrade an amazingly deep story line with the fact that the graphics where slightly droopy (for want of a better word)....the best bit, the ending , 'Iris' is one of my fave songs and the ending line was great, a real cliffhanger and it captured the very feeling that we all have in our gut in those situatiions....i look forward, with tremendous vigor, to your next submission, and i hope you folow the same path that created this wonderfull story

[Trem]

Still great not perfect yet though

Eh...continue with the good work

[iDream]

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I liked the story alot, it made me feel fuzzy inside ^^