Not a bad premise,
But it could have used some work, in my opinion. The graphics were ok, sound could have been better, and the fight scenes, although pretty good, could have been longer, since there were 4 different guys that he was fighting. The main character seemed a little stupid also, I think you should make him a little smarter....
Too much "tweening"
It was pretty okay but It was obvious you spent a lot more time on the fighting than the rest. I suggest you go back and fix the other parts, especially the part where he wakes up. I mean u can see his arm isn't fully drawn. Also the mouth moovements were bad. I think you should do them frame by frame just drawing them out. So anyways. It's got a lot of promise.
-IAN-
max payne????????????
sounds like
max payne?????????
the graphics too manga
De ja vu
On the plus side, there was some innovative animation of the limbs.
I'm sick of anime. Find your own style. Don't pretend you have a story; it's irritating. Don't take yourself seriously when the purpose is to depict some cool fighting scenes. Why is everyones hair in angular, saggy spikes. Someone needs a fro or something. Don't bite off more than you can chew; the mouths were sloppy and in the first scene it looked like the guy's hand was about to fall off. If the government were to send some guys to assasinate someone, would they look like male strippers. Maybe in the future, I guess.
Hnmmmm
Well the fight scenes were probably the best part...And they weren't fantastic. Work on the movement of the characters :) But it was OK.