Funny song, bad animation.
Funny song, bad animation.
Reviews for "Weird Al - You're Pitiful"
I Was Expecting More
You know at the beginning it looked like you might've had something going but...I was let down. First off the graphics weren't the smoothest nor greatest as far as looks. Just like the last reviewer, I own the fastest internet on the market...and yet it was still choppy which means you need to work on your tweening and animation skills.
With that out of the way I want to get to the major flaw of the flash that disappointed me. It was just boring to watch after a while because there wasn't much action. (By action I don't mean guns and explosions I mean activity and interest within the content.) The whole film was pretty just one scene with Weird Al grabbing random props and kind of interacting with them. The end. Not too much else to it. I understand you're trying to follow the feel of the music video by James Blunt but c'mon.. be more creative. The lyrics offer so much more for you to act upon and I feel you didn't take full advantage at all. But hey, you still did alright. It wasn't a total mess up or anything but just had way more potential. Good luck in your future projects.
Oh and in your credits... Its "You're" Beautiful, not "Your". Heh..
-Darkend-
arg
While Al's work is usually okay, this one seemed to fall short. Usually it's his fast tempo polka-esque parodies that are relatively funny, and the slow pace offered by "you're beautiful" didn't really seem to work out.
And the animation was okay.
not such a great one
the reason for this is because of the lip syncing and not all actions were there the dog wasnt there and a few more make his eyes blink also he looks as though hes a robot
Could have been much better
It would have been better if you just showed someone doing exactly what Al was singing about. If you did a good job with it, it might be right up their with the "Hardware Store" flash.