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^^Good Points^^
I liked the menu setup. Looks just like windows, which is pretty cool. I thought that the sound effects were good, and the storyline's in each part were good, and had some humor.
^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics looked rushed in both parts of this collab.
Graphics in mine wheren't too good because I can't draw good. :S
Sound Problems...
But other than that, great!
Graphics- (ishirm's Part) Well, I can't actually criticize the the windows that were appearing because obvioulsy, they were screenshots. Same goes for the wallpaper in the the background but the one thing I CAN criticize are the icons you drew. You drew those pretty well, so good job on that. And yeah, I know it's a Windows parody and there can't be any possible graphics you can draw but still, the icons were drawn nicely.
Graphics- (Little_Rena) The graphics were drawn poorly. I understand you were trying to do Frame by Frame animation and you did pretty good on that, but the graphics......ehh were kinda bad. Improvements: You could have added some kind of color, and have made the drawings look less roughly, if you know what I mean. Next time, try drawing the objects and characters more smoothly. But other than that, nice job on the Frame by Frame stuff.
Style- (ishirm's Part) GREAT style of putting everything together, especially the jokes and window appearances. Although the Window "paroding" might not be that orginal, you had some unique jokes going on in there. Nice job on style.
Style- (Little_Rena) Ehh....well there really wasn't much of a "style" going in here. The only thing I could judge portraying style will be the little story you had your part depend on. The story was practically dumb and looked like you thought of it like in 5 minutes. (No offense) Next time, try thinking more about what the little story is going to be about, let's say, about 10 to 15 minutes AT THE LEAST and trust me, it will be much better. work a little bit more on your concepts and plots.
Sound- (ishirm's Part) OK! Sound....It was having some difficulties. Let me explain. When the bunch of windows' appeared at once, you know the sound that occurs when some they come up, in first few, the sound lets say, sounded, but when the couple of last ones appeared, it stopped. What happened there? There was also another problem. When the mouse was going to close all of the windows that appeared, the "clicking" sound sounded before the mouse pointer went to the "X" on the window panel it was going to close on. So to say, the sound sounded right before ahead of it's time. Might want to fix that in the future.
Sound- (Little_Rena's Part) There wasn't any sound nevertheless in your piece. The only sound there was was the music. The music fitted the concept pretty good. Nice job on the selection of music.
Violence- (ishirm's Part) There wasn't any violence except for the explosion at the end.....which was of poor sound quality but nevertheless, it is considered to be violence. There can't technically be any "violence" in a Windows parody, so yeah....
Violence- (Little_Rena's Part) There wasn't any at all. But again, it's scarce to see a Windows parody with violence....so don't worry about this category.
Humor- (ishirm's Part) Ha, great humor in there. VERY NICE JOB on thinking those jokes and situations up. Keep up the good work. :)
Humor- (Little_Rena's Part) NOt meant to be harsh here, but your part wasn't funny....AT ALL. Little effort was added into this to in order for it to be funny. Next time, try thinking up of some more funny situations or jokes as ishirm did and you'll be better off in this category.
Overall- FINALLY! This review is almost done..........Anyway, many people seem to want "Windows Collab 2".......My opinion? GO FOR IT! You both have the skills to do so. Just make sure to at least follow a little bit on what I tried to stress here over this long review.........Nice Job to both of you, and good luck with your future submissions.
Ummm, thanks.
But like I have said, I am still learning flash.
>.<
Wow!
This is the best windows parody I have ever seen on ng, I can't wait for the next one.
You think so? That's great :D
Thanks.
1 good job...
Its the best microsoft parody i ever seen (i didnt see so much windows parody XD). Anyway its a good job so i give u 5/5. Im waitnig for more movis in this style.
Okay.
Well, it seems people want to see a 2nd Windows Collab, look out for that :)
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yeap! it catches the essence of Windows itself...
Keyboard not responding! Press any key =))))) lol =)))
PS
Can I get that wallpaper?
4/5btw
Thanks O.o
I'll see if I can get that wallpaper for you, lol...