Pretty Cool
Hey this wasnt bad.! It made me smile if anything. Average graphics and sound but fine idea.
Reviews for "No sleep"
MrRogersColostomyBag responds:
I think that was what I was getting at a quick smile :)
Meh...
Wasn't too bad for what it was, graphics and sound could have been better had you have put more time and effort into it.
Oh and to the guy who reviewed before me, the whole point of the flash was to over exadurate certain things like your body does when you're sleep deprived. I mean God, how many showers do you know that drop small anvils that explode into a mushroom cloud?
Oh yeah Bill we made it!
This is kind of weird being able to review my own work. No guys, it's not stolen, I just had the director submit it. I have been biting my nails for hours hoping this wouldn't get blammed and it looks like it's not going to yet.
I would like to take this time to thank you all for your votes and reviews of this cartoon and I can garantee you the next one will be much better done. This one was literally what I was doing while I was unable to sleep, now that I see it might have a future, I will gladly spend some more concious hours on the next one.
By the way can anybody tell me what donald duck cartoon I ripped off? I'm sure something similar has been done elswhere but I can't recall that particular incident.
Could have been better
Some funny points to it, but I think you could have worked on the script for longer to make it really funny. It has potential.
The graphics aren't too crash hot, but they get the scenario across. You could have worked on these for longer too.
2/5
This is like a one legged man
It's slow, might be funny to watch for a while, but in the end it turns sad anyways. I liked your attempt to make this funny but I couldn't help recognizing a VERY old Donald Duck- cartoon joke at the beginning. That would've been fine with some self irony, but now it just seemed like trying to walk away with someone elses ideas. Correct me if I'm wrong, in that case, nice work with that one. The graphics were far from good, but you'll get there finally if you train enough. :)
The animation and all the action were a bit too slow-going. You should try pacing them up a bit. With zooming, try using the "ease"- option in the properties to make it look faster. As for sounds, nothing special here, but at least sounds exist.
I might be a little rough here, but I just had a week full of bad nights and a high fever...
Anyways, a good start!
MrRogersColostomyBag responds:
Well I am glad you can have a moment to lament on your childhood memories from this flash, I am not an artist this was a quick experiment and well I have another flash coming so hopefully you can review it again maybe you can link to another infantile cartoon, thanks for the criticism stranger