Great story BUT...
You had a very nice story and i enjoyed it very much. Your drawings are awesome so is your animation. But there are a few things that were not so good.
First of all, you have to fix the preloader like 69anytime said, just to be sure everyone sees the movie and simply to make it more practical. Next, you have to get some sound in, it's a definit must, your animation seems very empty without it. If you don't want to put in sound effects, then at least put some music during the whole time that would reflect each scenes mood. It helps us viewers get more into. an animation is a whole lot more interesting with sound. Finally, this might not be as important as the rest, but i think that you have to be a little more original, i explain. Although your flash was good i felt that your characters and animation ressemble too much of Adam Phillips and Brackenwood. It almost seemed copied off him. I agree with using him as an influence and model, but i think you have to try and create your own unique looking characters for your movie. It'd become your completely personal creation, and we could admire you for that. For now we just see Adam in your animation, because it looks like his stuff a lot. Anyways, you have talent, keep it up:) i'll be waiting for your next work of art