Pretty cool, i like his style and i'm sure that's how he would look as if he was from the streets.
The colours wore good even though there are some cracks here and there but that's to expect from a pencil drawing.
Maybe you could do some more in this style? Maybe the whole gang. I would definetly enjoy seeing Mordecai, Pops, Benson and all the other ones in a particular fashion style or just as part of a gang.