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This isn't too bad. The graphics are okay. The sound and music are also good. But you can't end it here, you must make a part two!
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This isn't too bad. The graphics are okay. The sound and music are also good. But you can't end it here, you must make a part two!
A decent story line
This piece did have a semi-easy to understand plot yet you could have given us the reason why the king was so interested in the cane. Also it seems as if you have trouble with hominims like there is used in place of their, were in place of where, mabey should be spelled maybe and check you punctuations you had some missing commas. Also less time for each of the messages unless they are long.
Overall tight story and good use of sprites.
so close!
you would have gotten a fiver if it wasn't for the few grammar mistakes, and the horrible animation for the bow.... what was that??? please try harder, or just stick to the sprites. other than that good job on the story, can't wait for a sequel! ^_^
Love it
Only things I would change are spelling/grammar and perhaps make the dialogue boxes go a bit faster. I'm a bit of a fast reader myself. But otherwise, you do a good job mocking an object that doesn't get mocked too often in the Zelda flashes that I've seen in here.
Pretty good.
It was ok, I laughed a bit. "I can't walk, I need a cane," :gets up walks to the store: Lol. I didn't like the be continued though, and maybe make it so that you can choose when to go to the next reading thingy, went kindof slow for me.