It's ok.
It's just a start so I won't say it's bad or say it's really good. Since there isn't much for me to choose yet. But besides that it's alright. You'd think it's sad at first because the dog/cat or what ever it is was hurt. Then the girl bandages it. Then it uses love there. Then she gives the bow. You can see there that the girl liked it a lot. Also you can see it liked her a lot too. Once the girl left at the end for school. The dog/cat was sad.
yeah...
Hated it, but I do recognize it is because of personal preferences and the animation could have not sucked at all for many others , but an opinion is kind of a personal thing so :
I can take pink pretty stuff, emontional stuff, maybe not so much, but anime-ish stuff... but pink anime fluffy fantasy cliche overly sugary stuff that seem like they were drawn in paint ,not that much, i felt bombed with annoying crap. But my grade wont be crap because i realize that bla bla bla.
it was alright....
but because there was no voice for the girl and still other sounds and ambience, it made your sound score pretty low, even tho it was of good quality... that being said, i liked the style and the story seems like it might be interesting!
What I think
The graphics where great and so was the sound. However, the story is lacking. I hope you are more creative with the sequal. There is alot of potential with this.
I can't concentrate with all the "EEE"ing going on
I really enjoyed the painted backgrounds on this one, the animation IS pretty choppy but effective for the piece. After putting so much detail into the background, I would have liked to have seen the foreground characters affected by some sort of light source. Other than that, the dog/cat/rabbit thing is a very dreadful creature indeed. Not in a scary way, mostly in a "made me want to drink an AJAX cocktail" way.