Well Done
I gave it a three, cause its funny, but a bit short. It made my laugh tho, so good job
Reviews for "Hobbit Holes Ep.1: SE"
SAJNMaster responds:
Thank you. It is a bit short. It's just an introduction of characters. Look for the next episode soon though.
If I see
++++ Voices are all great.
++ Subtitles at start add extra humour.
-- I feel the starting animation could be a little faster. Considering its simplicity, I don't feel you can afford to keep us staring without distractions.
--- The way you mixed up auto-traced bg, fine lines on the fed-ex package and the south-park style. If you'd carried on mixing styles, it might have become a style in itself if done carefully. However, with the way that line weights and styles were mixed, seemingly with little thought, it just looked kinda awkward.
++ I enjoyed the tiny look into the bg with the genuine outtakes and screenies.
- Easter egg. Well drawn but disappointing.
-- I felt a few of the jokes (mainly the whole orc scene) were tired.
-- The end seemed a bit sudden.
--- Terrible buttons. Specially the 'next' buttons in the 'bg' section. Check the 'hit' frame. That's the area over which it can be clicked. Generally, a rectangle slightly larger than the actual picture works well.
+++ It sets the scene fairly well.
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If I see #2, I'll watch it.
Very Low Quality with a high Score
Graphic: Very dull, with techniques ripped off up the wazoo.
Style: SOUTH PARK FTW
Sound: For the love of god, stream your sound. Look up how to do so on Flashkit, or something.
Violence: It was there.
Interactivity: Nothing to out of the ordinary for an SE.
Humor: This movie barely made me smile.
Overall: Boring.
SAJNMaster responds:
My graphics were ripped off? Hello mister glock/lock bandwagon fan. Stealing characters from Aqua Teen Hunger Force to be in YOUR animations? "SOUTH PARK FTW?" Yeah, it's called parody. It's a parody on both South Park and Lord of the Rings. The art style is based off South Park but I hand drew all the characters. Also, the sound is perfect, I haven't heard a single person complain about it yet. Glancing through your animations you need to learn not to blow into the mic all the time when you make animations. Also, don't bash my humor when your animations consist of locks hitting each other with bats. Good day sir.