very good
you made an animation good for you maybe the next one will have readable subtitles.
very good
you made an animation good for you maybe the next one will have readable subtitles.
lol yea ^^ I did find them quite hard to read, ill make em easyer next time and hopefully have voices :D
Well made!
I really liked this. The music was clear as well as the sound, and the animation wasn't too choppy. I really think you did a great job ^_^
thx :D
not bad
A lot better than i thought it would be. Next time make the subtitles readable though, the red against that background kind made them very diffucult to read.
yea, they are hard to ready (too bad I didnt figure that out while making it as I never had the backround viewable ^^;) ill take ur advice into consideration.
kinda kool....
but need a bit improvement. camera panning is too much, make me feel a bit dizzy. but the rest is OKAY
im just abegginer so yea, I agree with the camera, ill learn to use it more :Dthanks for advise especially since no one else pointed it out :)
not bad for one of ur first
improve the animation a little and this stuff would get passed easy. overall, nice job