it's ok
I’m sure you have herd about a 1,000 reviews kid saying they don’t understand the story line and so forth so I won’t get into that all. For your first game I think it’s great you expressed some type of story line and though you didn’t have multiple endings, allowing you player to pick it choose this path throughout that game that is normally something that comes along with experience and better understand of how to make games in general. The same pretty much goes for graphics and the user interface as well though the graphics weren’t the best I’ve see they weren’t bad for something who’s just cutting his teeth or making games or within the graphics community as is the same for the interface.
1st the storyline – not bad, didn’t get it but I understand it was that it was suppose to be funny.
2nd More path choices allowing the user to pick this ending and choice
3rd Graphics not bad but keep improving on detail
4th a little buggy but that comes with time, and your use buttons use arrows, with a,s,d or “wasd” with “jkl” for controls
Overall a good first attempt
Anthony : )
Graphic design