good for a first try
its good for a first try but theres a lots of problems some even affect the uniseve. but the next one get origanl music updated it by overall larger and give it exaplale but its good somehow
Reviews for "A big tutorial v1.0c"
really badly done.
first of all, the first few categories in the menu, such as frame by frame and filters, are simply one short paragraph each with no examples, or attempt to even show where the options are in flash.
The "how to create a simple game" info, in one ridiculously long 0.01 font size line, shouldve been cut up into separate sections, so when you copy and paste it, you would actually know whether you got all the info or not, or better still, make it readable in the tutorial itself, on several pages. (i didnt even realise the info was there because the writing was so small, it just looked like a line).
and to screw things up even more, you forgot to put in the whole actionscript info section. I'm sorry, but that is just extremely poor, especially seeing as people who make tutorials should atleast know how to do things properly themselves. did you not even testplay the tutorial before you submitted it?
i think in your next tutorial you should simply ask someone else to to watch it before you submit it, rather than let a lot of other people on NG test it for you and write a whole unnecessarily bad review about it like i am doing now.
Go on, you can do better.
zoglander responds:
Thats the first proper review ive seen in ages, nice one :)
I'm going to clean alot of thing up in the next one
THANK YOU!!!
this teached me how to make Quality Changers! I own much to you!!!
I agree with last guy
You do need some animations in your tutorial. Also, the sound was really annoying.
zoglander responds:
in the next opne ill add a music player so you can stop the music :P
big but non user friendly
needs graphics to see the point, its too hard to just read so much and very borng.
add a lot of graphics to it, even screen shots.
ppl (esp. noobs/newbies) wont sit and read a flash. they need visual entertainment.