I love the vocals...
Your voice is made for relaxing jazz songs.... its nice and gentle.
But the jazz isn't that good..... real jazz has more of the "Jazz" instruments, i.e. the jazz piano, sax, and muted trumpet.
So just have more of those in your songs. The vocals really make up for it though and i can really tell that you worked hard on this :)
you are an amazing singer
and anyone who says other wise just has bad taste when it comes to singing voices, your awesome
sorry
you still need to work on your voice a little
but if you were going for less than average then your ok! :)
Man i really like this song
is it for sale or downloadable? i play jazz guitar and have just been fiddling around with it, really nice song.
it's cool
epic