hmm...
not bad for a second animation...
i thought it was pretty funny, and the story was good. however, you could use some help on graphics, but more importantly you need to practice animating (no offense). you could also use some work on sounds... for example, try not to use a sound, like that guy screaming, more than once.
Well, decent work... and with some time, effort, and commitment, you'll get better and be able to make some amazing stuff. :D
-maskedpoptart
succcccccckkkkkkkksssssssss
worst video i ever seen:(
bad animation
Im sorry but It was just badly animated. Believe it or not people walk, they dont slide accross the floor. People also have hands. The graphics werent very good either. Try using some gradients, shading techniques. I would visit the tutorial section if I were you and watch the walking animations/lip synching/and graphics tutorials. It will definatly help you improve. Its probably as good as my first submission which passed with a 1.8. But my second one (which I'm working on now)has vastly improved graphics animation and everything due to feedback from reviews. Take what people tell you and try and improve with it. It will make everyone happy. Oh and I gave it a 7 for humor cuz it was funny.
heh
heh, well i don't really like blog type websites, so ah heh.. anyway...i think the wierd end of it was heh.. kinda ah.. dunno... but anyway, your graphics were ok since you only succesfully uploaded only one before this, the sound was ok, the voices could of been little louder, the violence... how did that car explode? .... eh... nvm... heh... anyway over a ok flash, good job
I don't think it was all that bad
I got somthing, and it goes thumping like this. (ber ner ner ner ner)
all you need, is... my uhn tiss uhn tiss uhn tiss
I love that song :D.
the art wasn't amazing, but I like it when things are cartoony. I thought it was well done, for only a second flash. keep trying, and you'll get better
most of the shit with msypace has pissed me off aswell, so you're not the only one