Not bad for a start
Very nice story so far. The voice acting were all good except for that whitesmith's. The drawings were pretty cool and the action was decent. I couldn't read whatever you wrote in the black screens because they were too fast. You had to do a cliff hanger just when it was getting good, lol. Oh well, I already saw the second one and can't wait till the third. I hope u decide to make one that is.