really not that good.
This honestly sounds like it was written by a toddler. The language is very juvenile. For instance: "it left severe trauma on his right body." You mean right SIDE. And: I could hardly bear to see his lifeless body." huh? He died? I though they said he survived the operation. Also: "Dont think to much"? hahahahah lol. There were myriad other grammatical and concept errors, however these were the major ones. 2/5.
flash drama.
this was a good animation because it was a drama and i don't really see flash drama animations and this was a good change. very interesting.
Wow I'm so aorry to hear about your brother
Loosing a relitive isn't easy let alone your own brother. I don't know what I can say that will liberate you from your pain or somthing that hasn't been said to countless poeple acroos the world in your position. Instead, I'm giving this flash a 10 for a beautifull graphics and moving storyline.
You and I are similar, we have gone through terrible losses in our lives. I hope somday we can heal some of the wounds that plauge our minds.
Again, great flash.
I just needed to say...
I just needed to say that first your skills in flash have improved since the first one, and the other is pay no heed to thouse just think this is a pitty trip. there are people who understand and thouse who dont. See ya
great
wonderful stuff, I already gave alot of verdicts regarding on those past parts, I gave them all fives, coz they deserve it!
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