Reviews for Caveman Bowling

[InumaAsahiDe]

Nice!

The graphics in this submission were very well done but I have to say that you need to do a little work on the movements of your characters. they are, or should I say the caveman is, very simple in his movements. try to make him flow a little more when he's moveing and that will make your moive better. Your style is nice and I like the backgrounds that accompany your production. The music was very fitting of the cartoon and so i liked it. And most of all it made me laugh, even though it was short, it was short in a good way. Somethings need to be short because they are meant to have a quick and thought powered punchline. Seeing this I think you're movie here falls under that catagory. Good work, nice graphics, and a funny ending.

[French31]

Pretty good. :-)

Short and well done.

Note: the human being has never seen any living dinosaurus.

Bad-Atom responds:

I know, it's creative license. If "The Flintstones" can do it, so can I. :)

[Skaijo]

Doh!

You're play button seriously rubs me the wrong way. >_< But this is a cute flash. I liked the joke and the animation ended on a high comedic point that was all you.

A higher frame rate for a short this short would have been appreciated. The movement seemed slow and awkward (especially while his arm was turning) and needed some sense of easing.

The shape tween you used on the bowling ball caught me off guard and made me smile. I've never seen that technique used that way and that grainy effect turned me on. I also enjoyed both the music and the animation. They really complimented each other.

Overall, I have some issues with your play button and your framerate (which comes off as a bit lazy for such a short animation), but other than that, this is a solid animation.

Bad-Atom responds:

Don't worry, my future Flashes will have more user-friendly buttons. :)

I used 24 fps on this short, but I understand what you mean about the movements. I'll keep trying to improve in that area.

And I'm going to use the grain effect on all my future animations. It's a simple, subtle effect, but it's unique and people will instantly know it's one of my cartoons they're watching. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Cosmodious]

Not bad

But a bit short and the graphics weren't good enough to really get away with short

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