Good
Really like it man. Original and great to be ur 1st.
regarding previous review, just a couple of things..
"There was no story and no jokes"
There was a story. It was not like a JRR Tolkien thing but it was there. 65% of the material here in NG doesnt have a story (they are practically absurd). And, well, c'mon... no jokes? Jesus, what is this? Do we need joked for something to be good? No comments...
And i dont think it needs a preloader at all. Its not that big.
So, looking forward to see your future works.
Good luck.