Excellent, excellent.
Damn. This is a really cool concept. Excellent artwork, and an easy to follow format. The lack of music wasn't a big problem, but it would be nice to have some all the same.
I hope you do this again, and possibly instead of requesting certain users to contribute, make it open to submission, then decide from there which sketches to use. It seems many people, myself incuded, would love to take part in this.