One word to describe it.
WTF--- It was extremely random and pretty well done overall. I like gurlz w/ pink hair
Reviews for "Takabus"
Insane!
I gave the thing a 5 just for the simple fact it was insanely retarted! Graphics were good though, and the blobs were confusing, but it was funny anyway! k. sex plz? lol ok, anyway, good job, try cleaning up the audio, but other than that...
~Justin
Ummm... Okay
The graphics with the girl and unicorn scenes were awesome.
:) I luv unicorns... anywayz
I'm not really a fan of randomness entries, but this was kinda cool.
I didn't really get the beginning tho, and it was a little disturbing at different points.
But that being said, I liked it. Looking forward to what you come up with next.
'nuff said :)
Ummm... Right...
Well that wasn't to bad i guess, the hamster things getting it on at the end was a little disturbing but other than that, Good Job
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I had just written a well thought out and indepth review of this, then some terrible force erased it and damned if I want to say it all again.
Basically, I said that the seemingly "random" events tie well together by the end. They might not make sense in a strict context, but rather create a flow that is enjoyable to watch. You draw your characters beautifully, I was damn impressed by that horse.
My only complaint is that I think you need more background noise, like wind through trees or something. It was just so stark, that when the horse put his foot down, it seemed almost unatural and distracting. Maybe you wanted it that way, I don't know. I just found it a bit nerve wracking.
Anyhow, great job. As a new artist, I think you could have the potential down the road to be ranked up there with Bergner and AlanTheBox. Like I said before, I don't think you realize just how good you are at your craft. 8)
Mouflon responds:
Thanks for the review. You're right about the sounds. It's oddly silent at times, but I did add background wind noise.. I guess it's just not loud enough. I will have to look into how to improve that. Thanks again. I hope you're right about that, and I will do my very best :)