Reviews for Mummy

[Bezman]

shorter and sweeter

----- Starts automatically. You should always at least have a play button at the start. It can be a minor inconvenience and there's no reason for it.

++ Kinda amusing

--- A lot of it seems to drag. We know where the plot's going, we know what's gonna happen... you just drag it out by repeating what's already happened or having them repeat lines.

+++ I do really love the animation of him pointing, then having his arms twist round.

++ Decent voices.

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It was fairly interesting, with an amusing concept, but the script and movie could've been cut for a shorter and sweeter animation.

Coaly responds:

I actually did cut some. Your comments are noted, thanks for the detailed review.

[dreamstohack]

Decent Submission

Your animation was decent, and the sound was quite good. You obviously have to work on imporivng the graphics and flow, possibly lengthing it a bit. I daubt this go aorudn will survive, but with improvement it coudl wrk.

Coaly responds:

Thanks for the review, or whatever.