Seriously
For humor-10/10
For actual visualization of the whole thing-0
Seriously, the graphics were terrible. This here is wasted potential. You need someone to co-work with. You got the ideas, get someone to do the animation
Reviews for "My Half Life - #2"
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^^Good Points^^
Well I think it was better than the first episode by quite a bit. You actually drew a character that looks like Gordon Freeman, which makes the movie seem more interesting to me. Better jokes and longer than the last. Much better.
^^Needs Improving^^
Still the main thing would be the animations. Yours are pretty poorly done. I think you definitely need some more animating practice.
hmm...
the humor was better that the last one, and... the headcrabs looked like hamburgers
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Eh... you're on your way.
Try giving the graphics and the jokes a little more practice.
both bullshit & awsome
in da middle somewhrer still its awsome & bullshit at da same time!