First one was better
But i love the barbq idea!
Reviews for "My Half Life - #2"
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Eh... you're on your way.
Try giving the graphics and the jokes a little more practice.
Frist one better
I found the frist one to be better....
Loughing Out Loud!!
Lol!! hazardous chemical detected!!!!
i will give 10 but the graphics is not that cool
(title in work)
Well I think it was better than the first episode by quite a bit. You actually drew a character that looks like Gordon Freeman, which makes the movie seem more interesting to me. Better jokes and longer than the last. Much better.
Still the main thing would be the animations. Yours are pretty poorly done. I think you definitely need some more animating practice.