Really good, but it needs the sound I'm afraid.
You know, I don't think this will get a high score, which is a shame as it is a very good computer animation. However, had you added music, I would have to think this would get a good score. You can't really say "Pretend there's music." I could pretend I'm watching a movie, but I don't. Anyway, it was really neat, I liked it a lot. It seems that there are more people showcasing their cgi work. Keep it up man.
PS: If there's anyway you can get the sound on there, I suggest resubmitting it with sound.