Fix the sound
~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i was expecting something pretty good here, but you cant {HEAR} anything the {VOLUME} is way too low, you really cant hear anything, and i had the volume way up at the top level, so it does sound like you were trying to record just straight from the tv or something, it could also be the {MIC} maybe better quality of equipment, and a better way of recording stuff, possibly getting a soundbit would be another choice, these are just a few ideas to think about if you do ever decide to fix and improve on this, but regardless good luck.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a number of things i suggested above like, better equipment, better ways of recording and maybe a search from the net for soundbits would be nice.