Excellent.
My only complaint is that it's too short, and that this seriously needs to be continued... This game could have such a bright future, same as it's creator, but it's so open-ended, and the lack of the other phases of the story really leaves me disappointed.
TOO SHORT
It was a good game, The guardian was an ok difficulty (was not expecting that kind of strength from the first boss =P) but as i said IT WAS TOO SHORT for the next one make it longer and more characters as Liady18 said it should be a girl ( A healer perhaps? ) the ghost took like 20 min to appear so thats a bit of a bug... But other than the above said it was an awesome game and it could be way better if you fix the above. This is good game with lots of potential.
Well, a character is missing
I saw that in the GUI (Game User Interface) there is place for 3 characters,
My request is that the third character will be a girl (why not???) her class is to your choise.
that's my suggestion...
good
the game was good but could do with a bit more explaining of the charcater usage outside of battle.
Fun but not the best
An interesting RPG, with quite some clichés, bur overall not too bad. A few tips though: make the talk boxes larger. It was really annoying to see text cut into so many parts, it took away from the whole feeling of the game. Secondly: grammar. Another thing that's important in such a game is perfect grammar. I can't remember how many spelling mistakes there were, but quite a lot. And if it's going to be a full game, reduce the damage spells do. Pyro's inferno did something like 900-1000 damage, and I can imagine what effect that will have on balance. I liked the combat system though, and that thingy with the normal attack. Don't know for sure what it's good though if I make it perfect, it seemed as though I get an extra attack. The other thing I liked was that you get a monster description after you kill an opponent. Overall an enjoyable game, save for it's length.