Indeed..
An upper-crust flash, not something you see everyday.
The graphics could use some work, and the voiceover needs to be clearer and louder. An original idea, though. Improve your flash skills and similar things will do well.
Reviews for "The Original Raven"
CodeOmega responds:
thank you that you like the idea. though I will say it once again, TRACKPAD but I do intend to work in flash for a bit more and see the results and go on from there.
too slow
Needs work on the art and the sound quality. What really annoyed me was the pacing. The opening credits took way too long.
CodeOmega responds:
I am aware that my openings are a bit long, but I used to have an entire half of the flash be the credits so I have one question. Would you rather have a flash that is more than half just the credits rolling or would you prefer a little bit of a long opening?
couldnt understand anything he said
.Horrible sound quality excpsially for the voice adding some subtitles would b kewl or just improving the overall quality of the sound. graphics r kinda bad but not horrible
CodeOmega responds:
I'm sorry you think that my drawing is bad. But I would like to see you draw in flash with a trackpad.
ok...
The Raven is a favorite of mine... but i could hardly understand what he was saying! Either make the voice clearer, or add subtitles.
CodeOmega responds:
Origionally there was no sound under the talking so that would explain the difficulty hearing what I was saying. As for the subtitles as much as I think it would help, it aint gonna happen. Next time ther backround sound will be softer.