Potential!
While its clear you are new to flash, what with the highly simplistic designs and your characters having no arms or legs, and just hand floating in the air, you definitelty have a few things right!
The idea was cute, and despite the crude drawings, you got the EMOTIONS of the character across, which is what's important in animation.
You also used some rather dynamic camera angles there for something so crudely drawn.
I'd say if you keep working at it, you could very well make something fantastic in not too long.
p.s.
Its also good to credit the musician who made the music for your flash. That was catchy music and I'm sure others (including myself) would love to know where its from.