Nice work
Put ur notice of "PLEASE - If you don't like reading or if you don't enjoy imaginative story-based book-based games, do NOT vote on this because it is NOT intended for you!" at the start of ur comments. 'Cos some ppl might juz dislike it from the start and simply offer u a zero.
I loved it. It reminds me of the pasttimes. Got to figure ur looping of the music soon. Juz like those adventure books, it would be wise for u to learn/draw some grahical images into ur movie. I also wanna pick up items (portions/keys/lantern etc) along the way and put them into use them. This will not only enhance the reader's enjoyment but also aids ur scoring!