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Reviews for "Tetris Unleashed"
Jimtopia responds:
Thanks.
meh
Yeah it was ok... but even though its shorter your other submission; brawl was delayed is heaps better.
But this wasn't that good so yeah.
Dools. FEEL FREE PM ME IF YOU DISAGREE WITH ANYTHING I'VE SAID
Jimtopia responds:
Why would I PM you? You can have an opinion.
Tetris
You cant win a game tetris or can you but anyways you lacked in drawing your characters when he was mad you ddint expressed too much when he was suprised his face was normal no awe on his face anyways still good concept 8/10
Jimtopia responds:
I suppose I'll make the more expressive from now on?
heh
You can win a tetris game??
Jimtopia responds:
You can when you're training to be the god of tetris.
I felt the story wasn't particularly well told
I kinda like the way you used gradients fading out the white, to help make it all 'dreamlike'.
The plot was really odd. Kinda funny.
I liked the flashing colours when the blocks disappeared.
I don't like the way you draw your characters. Not just because of the lack of detail and the shapes of the legs, which I find aesthetically unappealling, but also because at times I felt the 'acting' wasn't great and I wasn't sure what was going through the character's head.
Like, after he shields his eyes from the light, is he surprised? In awe? Maybe stretch his eyes a bit!
The whole notion of this guy 'winning' at tetris in 1-player mode, kinda annoyed me, as did the way his move in the arcade didn't clear any lines.
Also, why have an auto-start? As far as I'm concerned, auto-starts are just an unnecessary inconvenience.
Maybe if you'd added stuff like having loads of folk around the world queueing up to play him, maybe he goes on TV or something, maybe loads of folk stare in awe... there's a lot more you could do if you incorporated reaction shots.
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Interesting story, nice use of white, but I felt the story wasn't particularly well told.
Jimtopia responds:
Well this being one of my earliest cartoons, I see the same problems that you do now that I watch it again. Thanks for reviewing.