I like it
I have played the game before and I find your story is really close to the ones in the game. Also your submission is a animation. I think you should have the pressing and presenting of evidence just like in the game. One more thing is not all your text is spelled correctly and some of the sprites animation gets glitchy. But overall. I like it.
The main idea was to make it a game with the "press" and "presenting" but then I changed my mind and made it a movie instead.
Sigh...
I hope that was your own original story. If you're just repeating what happened in the Phoenix Wright game, I'm going to be severely angry. *Hasn't played her copy yet*
Anyway, the story was captivating and kept me interested. But the grammar sucked eggs. Really, next time you need to get someone to do a grammar and spelling check for you. You made so many mistakes it was incredibly rare to see a single block of text without any. Those kinds of details will stand out, especially in a text-based movie like this.
And next time, be sure to make some of your own animations, and don't just rely on the existing sprites. The limited number of poses in the PW game will make this thing boring if you don't spice them up a little. Add some voice acting, stop abruptly cutting off and starting the music, and clean up your grammar. Then make sure you use your own story, and you're good to go. ;)
Good luck. I hope you continue to improve!
First I want to say that the story isn't a copy from the game. The story is all made up by me but I have used the characters from the original story.
Then I know that my english sucks and I wished I was better with the spelling.
And voice acting! No way! My voice is worse than my spelling. Belive me.
nice try
it was way to long. and kinda boring. i wached it all coz i wanted to see how exactly it ends but it still was long and borind. the sprites are good.
but its not a exuse to it being long.
next time try to make it a bit shorter. i gues you can voice act it all. but there are still ways to make it more interesting. think of one. please.
not bad, not bad
well not bad at all, especially for your first flash... but it has some major improvements to be made, like first of all the script wasnt well written wich confyouzd, jk the script and during mysteries its important to get everything in so that part stunk and it had bad sound, the script is easy to fix but the sound is otu of my fields cuz i can write but i dont have flash programs or anything but otherwise really well done
I had to lower the sound quality because when the movie was finished it had a size on 13 MB. But I shall try to get the sounds better. And also the spelling.
Yay, wright is the right way to go!
However, with a theme that requires so much type, so much mispellings is a very bad thing. Also, when you have the music start and stop somewhat randomly, it sort of kills the experience. But the graphics really do match the games quite well, and the storyline is definitly close to one of the game's. With a little tweaking, you could have yourself a good series.
Okay. I am going to go through the movie again and try to fix the errors. My english sucks. I will try to get the next part up in some weeks.