Good job
you have made an excellent start, usually when some say "my first flash" that is a big blam me signal. try to add a little more back story first before just jumping right to current situations.
Good job
you have made an excellent start, usually when some say "my first flash" that is a big blam me signal. try to add a little more back story first before just jumping right to current situations.
Pretty good
I hope to see more.
not bad at all!
My god, your a beginner? I found it well above average for a first-time flash maker. Keep up the good work. ;-)
Good first time work.
The story got potential, the graphics is smooth and its pretty funny.
Fortsätt så.
Change name
needth i say more.
it was okay.