Wow great job, going into my favs.
This was superb, i loved it, i'll just skip the ranting and go on to the good bad thing.
The Goods:
*Really funny, the randomness is great.
*You used the Kryptonite part (a real element in the story) in your own, staying true to the original is good also.
*Your characters seemed real (well only the fat kid)
*There's a bunch more, but i don't really feel like telling you them, just know they're there.
The Bad:
*Just like I said ^ only the fat kid seemed real, maybe give your characters a little more umph if that made any sense at all.
Great job man, an automatic favorite, I look foward to all your stuff in the future.