Good First!
Definitely a great first time out! 4/5 and keep it up!
Reviews for "Grey Man Skateboard"
Good one
I liked your style, u don't see good skate flash movies on newgrounds. Moves were realistic, i do skateboarding myself, so i know. I have tried something like this once, but u did it better. Having in mind it's your first flash, i give you 4/5. I bet this will make it through. Good luck with other movies.
Lopaxe
A great start.
I liked the style of this animation a lot. The movements on the grey guy, though small, looked very natural. Keep working on some more complicated and/or longer movies.
Look at him go!
Very nice work, i expected to get a blam out of this, most skateboarding things suck "censored word". Although there is plenty of room for improvement, when isnt there? You should put your skills to making something else before you improve this. Overall, keep at it and you'l have plenty of submissions on this site.
Keep up the good work!
Nintendoor
Hmm
I really like the stickman. I really do.
Liked the loading graphic as well. Nice thinking.
But the other graphics.. A paid animator makes sure all aspects of the animation are top-notch and equal to each other - it makes for smooth transitions.
Speaking of smoothness, your stickman was really smooth. The blueness of the board was kind of jarring, though.
You might want action as well. It was smooth and all, but if he's the only one moving -- ever, it get's the monotone feeling.
Seeing tons of potential! Keep it up!