Not very good.
Where oh where to begin...first off, I have to say, I wasn't really expecting much when I clicked the title in the Flash Portal menu, and you know what?... I was right. You have a high potential to do great things, but if you're gonna keep submitting things like this... you may never reach that potential. This was very crudely animated, the graphics were below sub-par, and the story was very predictable as it went along. Also, the lack of voice overs brought it down too. All you put in place of voice overs was text, and even that wasn't good either. Your spelling and punctuation was off, and sometimes the text went out of the speech bubble, and when that happens, you can tell you didn't put much effort into it. The humor would've been much funnier if you didn't have to read text, and if it was animated a little better. I'm not saying you suck or anything, I'm just pointing out the mistakes you overlooked. I hope your next flash will be a much needed improvement.