The sound and art need a bit of work.
I saw the first one today too and I got a real kick out of them. Invisible goths creep me out. Maybe that's why I never see them in the halls. There always in class when I get there. Weird. Anyway. The art isn't the greatest and I need to turn my speakers up all the way to clearly hear the voices and the music when with other flashes they come through fine. But the storyline is perfect. If you fixed up the sound and graphics I wouldn't be surprised if this got on the fornt page. Please keep making these.