Pretty funny.
It was a little short, and the heavy breathing sort of bothered me a little bit. Also, the voice didn't seem to match the other, except for the kid who came into the room telling you it was 2 in the morning. Funny voice by the way, does he (or is that you?) or whoever it is do that himself (yourself) or is it lipsyncing? Otherwise, it was a pretty funny clip. Really funny idea, I really like your FPS. I'd like to see one that's really long with a lot of weapons and traps and stuff, but of course that's all up to you, if you want to do that or not.