(( nice graphics and detail ))
~~REVIEW~~
notbad on this, the graphics was good, and it was a good flash, ill have to checkout the others soon, you might want to think about some compression though.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was fine besides the size which was not all that bad but, Reduce the file size so that it doesnt take loads of time to download, look for areas to compress, maybe the intense graphics or the audio needs to be cut, but whatever the case try and compress it.
~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash and entertaining but could use some compression in some area.
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