Listen up, don't ignore this, please.
Please take my advice. I've seen alot of Zelda stuff on the net, and not just on Newgrounds. I really wanna see this thing explode all over Newgrounds by kicking ass and taking names.
First off, I absolutely love the script. The sounds were excellent, too. But the reason graphics and sound got a seven were because they weren't in sync. I think it's about a full two seconds late. This is most notable when Saria tackles Link. Also, the voice of link needs to be a bit younger or higher in pitch. He sounds even older than Adult Link from OoT.
No violence, but violence isn't usually part of the recipe. In fact, for this particular preview, it seemed alot like an improvement There was a Play button, but as far as Style and Humor, you won.
Consider slowing the Link and Saria chase.