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^^Good Points^^
Not a bad idea for a movie. It's a much better take on the lame animator vs. animation knock offs. I really liked the music and creative usage of sound effects.
^^Needs Improving^^
I can tell you are pretty new to animating, as you spend a lot of time on animations that aren't particularly interesting or impressive, like the general movement of Mario. You need to be more to the point in these simple animations, and add some more detailed stuff as well.
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Needs more detail
Taking a screenshot of your computer works great, if you can see the details right. I can't read what all of the icons say underneath and the icons themselves look like badly drawn sprites. If you fixed that, you'fd be up there with Animator Vs Animation.
Still, it's a nice start and a nice little idea you have here, keep working on it
Not sure about the music though...
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I know the picture detail suck, but the screen size was bigger than you see. (It got smaller on NewGrounds.. I dont know why?)
It wasn´t really maked for NewGrounds in the first place, but why not submit it anyway?
Nice flash
That's a cool flash. How long did it take you to make it?
1 or 2 days
Cool!
original and (sorta) funny! I likes it! but I say make it longer, and make mario do more shit. apart from that, good luck with the sequel!!!
YES
you should make a downloadable mario desktop buddy! o and my other coment! make it longer> you have the base to make a way longer movie! mario could do tons on that desktop and it would be hilarious to watch it all!so plz do and overall great movie!
Thanks!