honestly
I couldn't finish the whole thing i am sure the animation is as good as the starting but that background music just sucked to me it dragged it down. But it is good what i watched keep it up just with background music at ket moments
Reviews for "DevilSlayer II"
Meh.
The animation is still... I don't wanna say it...
Also, in some part's the music overlaps the dialogue and pretty much ruins it.
that definitly coulda been better
WTF!!! how did this make it into the daily top5?!!!
this sucks worse than a blackhole!!!
JazLyte responds:
Wow, you're cool!
Lots of work, but I feel like i've seen it before.
Just some constructive criticism. I'm not trying to be mean or anything. But check it out:
The good news: You've got some great talent, your shots were good, the art was good. I can tell you've got a lot of potential.
The bad news: You're just one in a million people out there trying to do anime. Let me tell you somethin' THE ASIANS GOT IT COVERED. Im telling you this, why? Cause I think if you try and develop your OWN style, you could be one of the better animators on here. Learn to do mouth shapes! It makes a world of difference! Take the length of this movie, and cut it in half. Don't hang on to a shot for too long cause it looks pretty.
JazLyte responds:
lol ok, you caught me on the scene dragging, i know, i hate it an I'm tryin to stop, but it's tempting when u don't know what the heck you're doing! And I have created my own style. Even though it's based on anime, I designed my own dread type hairstyles for black characters. either way, people complained about my first movies being too short, so i make em' longer, and now this? sheez. I do what I can, but the next one's gonna be tons better, i promise
hmmm
So 1. An imortal super team=done before
2. Hate to sound cryptic but you need to work on volume for the voices and down on the music volume
3. Animation. Either giver 120% or 0%. Seriously. I watched the first one. You played with better animation than the fights in this one. Put more effort into it. Potential exists here. Just make it look better. Expect future remarks.
4. Fluidity for the lose my friend. I understand you want several splitting storylines going on. What good writer doesn't? But make them flow better and include better animation in it. Watch as they flow once you've made the change.