Funny
I loved the "You'll have to wait untill the black box fades out" part. And yes I too must confess to love the peanut.
Reviews for "Technology Today Episode1"
DrClay responds:
we all love that peanut lol
you know i
was going to put to be continued instead of the little black box.
it was going to say "you will have to wait until part 2" but i went the extra mile even though i had problems.
the sound got screwed up after a while.
thanks for the review
good luck with your stuff
HAAHAA!!
I liked this quite a bit. The style is very similar to the style I am working on now, so it must be a 10!!! LOL. Here's the breakdown:
Graphics: 8. It wasn't highly-detailed, but suited the video vrey well. Also, the lines were extremely clean and I didn't notice any little lines sticking out, which means you probably edit the heck out of you Flash.
Style: 10!! I like this style of animation. Using tweens is a smooth animation which, of course, can limit the artist at times so finding ways around it when needed makes these types of Flash very rewarding.
Sound: 7 It was good for the most part, but the green, floating guy's voice was very low and hard to understand. The other voices were good, the backgound music sounded good too. Also, sound was obviously condensed so that is always a plus.
Violence: 1 The guy held a gun. That's about as violent as it got, but that's fine as it isn't really needed.
Interactivity: 2 All I had to do was push a button. Again, this doesn't really matter in a Flash, so it's really moot. Although, it would be nice if at the beginning there were shortcut buttons to parts of the movie. Like "Skip Title", "Credits", etc.
Humor: 8 It was a pretty funny movie. Not a laugh riot, but it was still quite funny. An 8 is REALLY good, so be happy.
OVERALL: ZERO! I HATED IT!!! Ok, no... I give you an 8!!! Great video and I'm sure I'll be seeing more from you in the future. I see you've got a good score already (ALL HIGHLIGHTED IN BLUE FOR YOU!) so that is something to be proud of.
Best of luck to you, I'll be keeping my eyes open for your Flash in the future. Although, I guess I'll need them open or I'll crash my car, fall down stairs and all kinds of bad stuff, so... yeah.
5/5!!
DrClay responds:
do not worry........ the next one will have the violence.
and some of the small flaws in this will be fixed.
(happy for highlighted blue)
thanks for the review
good luck with your stuff.
that was hilarious
plz make this a 2 part not 3 part series,(i can't wait already!!)
DrClay responds:
i cant wait to get started on it LOL
i'll try not to let it be part 3.
lol.
thanks for the review
good luck with your stuff
(oh god its 2:30 am i cant sleep)
It wasn't half bad
Pretty good, though it's the 'fetal position' not 'fiddle position'
haha
unless thats what you were going for...
DrClay responds:
actually i was planning to make them go into a small conversation like
man in red: err you mean fetal position
man green: what
man red: its fetal position not fiddle
man green: oh yeah i know that
red: so why did you say fiddle if you knew it was fetal?
man green: shut up
but i decided not to
and then forgot the spelling error
I'm looking forward to a sequel
^^Good Points^^
Well, I will definitely be looking out for a second episode of this series, since this one is pretty promising. I thought the trance music was very cool, and the voice overs were done well. The animations were pretty good as well. I liked the storyline and the great humor. I laughed a few times at this, which is more than most movies. Good job.
^^Needs Improving^^
There were a few minor spelling mistakes. I didn't really like your drawings either. They just seemed really strange to me, but your animations made up for the drawings.
DrClay responds:
i always kinda drew like that.
so wat if they may seem a little strange.
to me they done seem strange at all.
every flash author draw stuff in his or her own way.
its true
look around sometimes and you will see that everyone makes their flash differently.
and i dont mean just by ideas.
everyone's Character is drawn in the authors own way.
and these characters were drawn in my own way.