Reviews for SJ - [Octane] (wip)

[djhoohaa]

Nice

yea its good but like the comment below i think it needs more bass and just that would make it a load better. but its still good :) 5/5

SteakJohnson responds:

damn i just listened now and yur right it needs much more bass. Thanks

[alertG]

awesome

i disagree with Cmon5. Yes what he said needs some work, but you can hear it.

I would up the EQ on the bass end of both the kick and bass, and i think it will sound better just with that. also maybe tone the hats down a TINY bit at 1:38 or somehting and around 2:00. but still good. finally, i would change it up a little past 2:30. it gets kinda repetative at that point or around there.

but other than that, the drum work and melody sounds really good!!!! progressively getting better from your earlier works! really great dnb. congrats.

SteakJohnson responds:

I agree and thank you, i willl add bass to everything

[boney-man]

Hey, nice job man

This is a lot better than the last tune I heard from you. I like it a lot, actually. The bassline is really good and the drum fills are also nice. It has a good drop too. The ideas are great, as CMon5 said. I have to agree with him about the bass and drums. You need a sub and a harder reese here, as well as some harder drums. Otherwise, it's flawless, actually :| Looks like you just need some better headphones for mixing, and you'll be on your way. Once you do get some good headphones/monitors, you have to come back to this song. It's great.

Keep it up and you'll get on my list easily man!

~Ackute
9/10
5/5

SteakJohnson responds:

thanks man im def. comin back to this track

[Flared24]

wow

altdas is a fucking idiot

you already know what i think though, n***a

SteakJohnson responds:

he is and thyank you im workin on the remix 2morrow

[CMon5]

Needs work

It's a good draft with some nice ideas. The "big" polish you need to apply shouldn't be too much work. First of all, it needs (imho):

- A tougher, more dominant bass.
- A kick drum that you can actually hear.

Focus on those first, and you'll score a lot better ;)

SteakJohnson responds:

I agree and the mix is terrible