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Reviews for "Taekwon do stick"
Good job
You had a good selection of music and characters, though I would have liked to hear more of the song. Great Job otherwise.
Not too bad if I do say so myself
I rather liked it. The story could use some work and the action needs to be a bit more fast paced. Also the graphics could use some work but you'll learn that with time. For now though (I'm assuming you're somewhat new to this) it's good. Just keep practicing and I'll keep an eye out for a "New and Improved" sequel. It has potential if you can maybe expand upon the story or maybe make a new one that's similar.
Better than I thought!
As a rule, I don't care for stick flashes. I watch and rate them anyway, though, based on creativity, technique, and all that stuff that isn't affected by personal bias. This surprised me with its pretty cool sequences and slick pacing. Though we know very little, it tells a story nicely.
For feedback's sake... honestly, I think the caption bubbles detracted from it. Mostly the 'oh no' bubbles and the parents one. They seemed to detract from the flow.
Also, some sections could have been smoother. I would have liked to seen the white-hair stick swiftly defeating his enemies, which he did, but without the long pauses before each action segment.
Anyway, far better than par for stick flashes, with lots of potential. ^^
Hmmmmm..
Well the flash was cool but also kinda strange, but like when he is like oh sheiza i thought that was funny. It was also kinda short. But it was ok just keep it up.
export-gold responds:
Ha ha ha thanx man you rock.