i guess it was alright
it wasnt the best but its somthing you could watch when your bored
well *yawn* im bored i guess ill watch it again lol
i guess it was alright
it wasnt the best but its somthing you could watch when your bored
well *yawn* im bored i guess ill watch it again lol
it was just meant to show some of my smaller things :) not mean as something spectaculair
Eh, Nothing Special
This serves more as a plug for your website than anything else (I'm not saying that that's what you intended it to be). But you couldn't go anywhere without links to your site everywhere. Then you have text on top of the movie (like in "Lonelyness"), which is really distracting and well, ugly.
The fact that you put a lot of unfinished and pointless work on here (Lonelyness and much of your 3D work) really bugs me. This is the kind of stuff that you put on a website, not submit to a portal. While some of the stuff you've got here is quite good, you're showing it to the wrong audience. These are the kind of things that you put in an online portfolio.
There were a couple bugs as well. When you click on "menu" from the clay menu, it takes you to the 3D section. It should take you to the main menu, like the "menu" button on the flash section does.
My last critique: the work itself wasn't that great. In this case, it's quantity over quality, as none of these could have survived on their own. The clay was nothing special (though it's better than most), and the only good 3D flicks are the trains. Lonelyness was decent, until its abrupt stop.
My suggestion? Instead of showing a bunch of animation tests, show something of real quality.
4/10.
the whole point was to show my smaller work for once.
and the clay itself could have scored 3.40 easilly.
zeen
Okay, this is a very strange flash. It lacked everything!
pie
cool
i love the clay things ^^
very funny
the flash is a bit weird.. and the cube doesn't rotate well, the 3d animations are a bit boring, but hey.. school is boring
good job
Finish Lonleyness!
Preety good, seems like you just wanted to show off your random experiments. FINISH LONEYNESS PLEASE! It just looks like an awesome concept.