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For a first animation, that was really good. Maybe a good storyline would help. You could get far if you improve on your skills.
Reviews for "Jet Pack"
good graghics
this is good but could do with a pre loader ^_^
Well DONE!
Not too much to be improved there mate, not much at all... Although I suggest you watch the colours carefully (I think they randomly changed), and also make sure that you know EXACTLY what we are seeing (I could see where the drawing of the guy stopped). Also you might wanna make a preloader, either NG one or stylish one like using the jetpack power-guage or somthing smart. All in all, an EXCELLENT first flash ;)
Woah! serious its ur first>?
Well i cant really give ya constructive criticism cus i aint a flash animator.. but i can say that I enjoyed it by heaps! Graphics were actually quite good and like i liked the bg music it just gave off that the light-hearted humour feel to it! Along with the whole short storyline. so Great job mate! looking forward to your future works!
lol
thats all i got 2 say