bit more
if you added script eg, the name of who's talking on the peices of text, that would improve it alot.
also the music gets repetative, try changing the music when the scene changes. Sound effects would be good if you arnt gonna put in any voices.
even though the story is kinda typical and anyone who's seen a few good Sci-fi movies, then they could probably guess most of it. Still a great piece of flash no doubt, just not ground breaking.
Hmmm... there's something here.
My evaluation of "Frank Episode 2".
This movie teemed with style and great director's instinct. I especially love the camera angles shot in this movie, which were very professional and crucial to impoving this film's professionalism.
There were somethings that really bothered me. First of all, you mis-spelled a couple of words (ex: civilsation, surpised), which shows that you didn't preview this movie in front of a test audience. I reccomend you do. It's really the main thing you need to get to the next level of animation. The folks at NG forums will be happy to help you with that.
I'd also recommend that you get some voice actors, many of whom you can contact at the Voice Actor's Guild here on NG forums as well. Just use the search feature and post a link to a script and they'll send you their samples.
Other than that, you have some promising characters and a very nice animation style. Hopefully, there well be more detail in the future both in art and plot. Either way, I left this movie happier.
Really nice work
FOr something that appeared to be drawn mostly freehand, and with most of the animation done FBF, this was a surprisingly well-done submission. Excellent content, very good balance of humor and suspense, and GREAT choice of music, which makes me look past the lack of recorded dialogue.
Very stylish, and a good length. One of the better submissions I've seen lately.
This was awesome!
Good drawings n musik also good history
Very good
Very good work.
As said before, I suggest you spell-check your work. Adding voices and a bigger variety of bg music would make this a 10. Keep it up, great job.