not bad
not bad, the idea is totally original...even though this reminds me of one of those 70's kung fu movie plots.
mabe you should create a side story, that goes breifly over the Jamurai's training...cause as of now the impression I'm getting is that he's a 'Ronin' because his methoids are anything but traditional[eccept the fact that if you draw a weapon against a samurai its a fight to the death reguardless of your intentions] sorry I think too much!
so what do you think? am I warm?